Comments on: Little Omar and the Eid Party

By: Ahmad, slave of Allah

Ahmad, slave of Allah — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 00:23:26 +0000

Salam,
Masha Allah! I applaud your creativity and writing and I loved this part of the story… but when will the next part be coming? What happens to Omar’s parents and Omar’s feeling of triumph over them? Maybe you can turn this into one chapter of a book.

By: Sami

Sami — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 17:11:04 +0000

Although the story needs more attention to some artistic details, i think overall a good attempt on the side of the author.

By: umhasan

umhasan — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 07:39:04 +0000

nice, sweet, and funny story:).

By: Nora

Nora — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 03:04:11 +0000

I enjoyed the story..keep writing =).

By: ali mahmud

ali mahmud — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 23:42:56 +0000

Interesting………

By: Abdulrahman Jasim

Abdulrahman Jasim — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:24:51 +0000

Well done brother Zaid. the subject you have picked about unity in our communities was smart and i hope that, we will have the unity among us one day.
As I don’t read stories in English so often i was confused in some parts of the story, where the husband and the wife were conversing inside the kitchen, I did not know who was talking to who I mean I had to read it couple times to get it, but I believe this was from my side coz I don’t read English story often as i said before

By: samah jundi

samah jundi — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 19:52:40 +0000

I like the idea and setup. I wish Al-Talib publish more stories like this one. God Bless.

By: muhsin rashidy

muhsin rashidy — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 18:55:25 +0000

This story brings up something that indeed is thought provoking. If we can have more of this….thank you

muh

By: Zack

Zack — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 03:25:01 +0000

Very nice and insightful story. I hope to read more such stories that deal with the issues of our community. Thanks and God bless.

By: Altalib

Altalib — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 02:02:29 +0000

Nice story Abo Jenna. Inshallah next Eid will be better for Omar ans Salar.